Draft of double page spread

To assist in my knowledge of what the appearance of my double page spread of my magazine may be like, I decided on creating a draft copy of it, so I could put the ideas in my head onto paper and see if my sketch designs from earlier were workable or not.
Below is the draft copy that I’ve made, as well as some annotations that explain my designs.

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To aid the designing process I asked my audience for their thoughts on my double page spread draft.
Here is what they had to say, powered creatively by Voki.