Draft of front page

To gain an understanding of what my front cover for my magazine could potentially look like, I decided to create a draft copy of it, so I could play around with my ideas and see if my previous sketch designs worked well or not.
Below is the draft copy that I’ve created, as well as some annotations explaining my choices.

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To get an understanding of what I could improve on this I asked my audience for their thoughts, presented here by interactive online tool, Voki.